I hear an upbeat happy song here.  I was going to keep this as poetry but it seems a waste when I already have a melody coming for chorus…

Verse 1

I felt the Om Boom from the moment you walked in

Yeah it was love at first sight on that hot summer night

Oh you shook that crowded bar & you looked a shining star

And I felt you grab my heart as you waltzed on by…

I loved you from the start

(I loved you from the moment you walked in)

Chorus

I’m gonna make you mine

Even if we last for just one day

And I’m gonna make you smile

Even if it’s only for one night

Yeah yeah yeah

I’m gonna give give give it away

I’m gonna give give give you my

Blue Rose Bouquet

I’m gonna give give give it away

I’m gonna give give give you my

Blue Rose Bouquet

TO FINISH

Verse 2

Even if I met them all the seven billion people round the world

You’re the only man I’d want to open my door

And you’re still the only man I’ll ever let dance on my floor

Cause I tasted heaven in your kiss

And I felt the angels in your touch

(Now you’re the only man to ever get me at all)

 

 New song budding (again)…pretty deep lyrics.

VERSE 1

Lovin you made a fool outta me

And now I’ve gotta run and hide away

Cause every step forward feels like two steps back

And every step toward you i’m just lamb on a rack

But one day soon I’ll come to say Hi

When I’m strong enough to hear goodbye

Back with grace to where we started

Back to the place where we parted

(You & me face to face)

Tell me then you never felt a thing

Tell my heart it was all just a lie

CHORUS

I’ll let you tell it to me

Tell my heart goodbye

I’ll let you touch me

And push me away for real

I’ll let you crush me

And see my tears for real

I’ll let you tell it

Tell my heart goodbye

I’ll let you show me love, yeah

(Show me, show me, show me love)

(fuck love, fuck love, fuck love)

TO FINISH

VERSE 2

Lovin you made a fool outta me

Or  I’m gonna unlock those cuffs

Set you free n walk away forever. 

Yeah, i’m gonna walk away stronger than ever. 

And you’ll never catch me

Cause I’m gonna fly far far away

And I’ll never fall again

Oh no, I’ll never fall again

Never ever fail again

And if you try to find me

Oh if you try to catch me

Oh if you want me then

You’ll  only hear my echo

Blue rose petals falling

Whispering goodbye from our skies

Cause you left it too late…

And I’ll be gone forever

Yay – came up with a melody for this on my way to work this morning  🙂

Structure:

Capo 3

Picking pattern

Verses:

G, F#, C, B, Amin (x2)

C, Emin (x2)

Intro – Picking pattern (x2)

Verse 1

Two candles flicker slow in the breeze

And I gotta longing

Yeah I wanna know your middle name

I want everything there is to know about you

Yeah I wanna know the day you were born

I wanna feel you hard n strong in my arms

All night long til we can’t take the pain anymore

Oh-h can you see I want you all?

Verse 2

A million stars rain down over me

And I gotta burning deep inside

That lifts me to higher place I’ve come to know

Tells me everything there is to know about you

Yeah I think I know the place where we were born…

I wanna feel your heart beating strong

Til morning comes to carry us away

Oh-h can you see I want you all?

Chorus (x2)

We could have it all

We could have Eternity…

So when you gonna give

When you gonna give me more?

I say we could have it all

We could have Eternity

So when you gonna give

When you gonna give it all?

 

Verse 3

One day I’ll wait forever for you

Cause I gotta yearning

For our kiss again so hard so ecstasy

I just gotta see the black in your eyes

Your shadow screaming out for my soul…

I wanna feel you breathin deep as you sleep

Til tomorrow comes for all time

O-h-h can you see I want you all?

Chorus

Outro

Last night your wildflowers bled into my dream

Did you hear my scream?

Tell me do we share the same dream

Do you believe

O-h-h do you believe in Eternity?

 

I thought the Love Struck album song list was complete…but I can’t seem to stop writing.  This one is in a major key for a change 🙂

21 Dec

Chorus came to me yesterday, along with the melody too.  It’s kinda cool, plus a little odd since we aren’t even together. Love has got me – I’m completely gone’

Can’t do it 😦 frigging work eating me alive

VERSE 1

Last summer time I tried so hard to walk away

But only reached the horizon before turnin round again

Cause I felt a rush inside like a roller coaster ride

Oh yeah those summer time tides they pulled me back again

Then Autumn time I tried so hard to leave again

But only reached till midnight blues before spinnin round again

Cause I felt so crushed inside like a broken-hearted vase

Oh yeah those Autumn time blues they dragged me back again

Pre-chorus (kinda rap)

Darlin I heard your call

And hearts they just don’t lie

But  I ran too fast n flew too high

A rocket to the sky I passed you by

Now I’m all alone n flyin high

(I’m so lost, I’m so lost, I’m so lost)

I’m so Lost In Ecstasy

CHORUS

There’s just too of much me and not enough you

And I know I gotta call it a day

And I know I gotta walk away

But you’re in my way

Yeah you’re blocking me in

And I just can’t seem to get away

No I just can’t seem to break away

So I guess I’ll stay another day

Totalled in the dark, eclipsed by your heart

Cause I don’t know how to walk away

No I don’t know how to break away

Verse  2

Winter time I tried so hard to close the door

But only took a step before cold air froze me there again

Cause I felt a stab inside with a knife carved outta ice

Oh yeah those winter time icicles blocked me in again

Spring time I tried so hard to fly away again

But only reached the sunset before May day held me there again

Cause I felt a grab inside like a hand wrapped round my heart

Oh yeah those spring time sunsets they called me home again

Outro

I always miss the midnight train

Cause I just can’t bear the pain

Stars they  burns too brightly

And stardust pulls me back again

All alone n flying high

Lost In Ecstasy

 

 Struggling with these lyrics   😦

2/04/17      Lyrics now in place – I kinda have a ‘song’ now

25/03/17 – Chords/structure – picking pattern/add G (my ‘raindrop pattern’)

Capo 2

Verses:

C   G   F   C (x2)

Pre-chorus

A min   G   A min

E min   F   C

Chorus:

A min  G

??

Jealous

Verse 1

I don’t mind the girl who sits

Beside you on the train

Or the one who pours your morning brew

And adds the sugar cane

And I don’t mind the pretty girls

Who pass you by each day

Or the ones who get to hear

The sweet words that you say

 

Pre-Chorus

But you’ve got something

Something they’re gonna see

And it breaks me, oh so

(Cause I know, yeah I know, yeah I know)

Maybe tomorrow, next week, next month

Or ten years from now…

Someone’s gonna steal your heart away 

 

Chorus 1

I’m jealous of the girl who’s gonna win your heart

The one you’re gonna love the hardest from the start

I’m so jealous of the girl who’s gonna be your everything

The one you choose to wear your diamond ring

Verse 2

I don’t mind the girl who wants to walk

Beside you in the rain

Or the one who gets pink butterflies 

Each time she hears your name

And I don’t even mind the girl you kissed

For the first time time (come what may)

Or the lonely girls

Who wished that you would stay

Pre-Chorus

But you’ve got something

Something they’re gonna see

And it breaks me, oh so

(Cause I know, yeah I know, yeah I know)

Maybe tomorrow, next week, next month

Or ten years from now…

Someone’s gonna steal your heart away

 

Chorus 2

I’m jealous of the girl who’s gonna win your heart

The one you long to walk beside you blue rose rain

I’m so jealous of the girl who’s gonna be your everything

The one who’s gonna claim your last name

 

Bridge

Cause one day cupid’s gonna aim n fire

And some girl, she’s gonna steal your heart away

Chorus 3

I’m jealous of the girl who’s gonna win your heart

The one you’re gonna love the hardest pink champagne

I’m so jealous of the girl who’s gonna be your everything

The one you choose to wear your diamond ring

Outro

Promise me you choose the girl

The one who’s gonna love you the hardest

(Cause i’ll never be jealous of that girl)

The one who’s gonna love you the way that I do 

The way that I do-o-o-o

The way that I do-o-o-o